Okay, what can I say, flaws or not, I love this page to pieces, because there is nothing more fun than drawing Axel getting beat up. For one thing, stuff falls out, like a little pinata filled with toys. For another...look, it was just fun. It was oodles of fun.
...I would change it up so Jame's hand isn't breaking the border of the third panel though. I definitely agree that screws up the pacing a bit.
Last page of this for now. I'll finish up the story (three more pages) and redraw some of the earlier pages) later.